I think.
I’m worried it’s not hooky enough. Eh. I know better than to worry too much about that at this stage.
I took a couple right turns between one day to the next, which means I actually wrote half again what I needed. I used to keep these bits of unused writing, but after years of keeping an “odds and ends” file that never got accessed again, I know you need to just kill the words. It may have seemed clever in context, but there’s more clever stuff coming, honest.
So anyway, chapter two starts tomorrow. In the meantime, my brain gets to decide where it’s starting.
